Wednesday, 3 February 2010

Feedback

Kate: Your spread is amazing and has a great look which draws the readers eye, It is aesthetically pleasing and flows easily over the two pages. The only concern I have is where the page split will lie, and whether is will cause some of the image to missed. The Front cover is extreamly professional and original, which will eaisly appeal to the target audience. However I do believe that some articles that are also inside the magazine, should be seen on the front cover, a date and issue number should also be included. The contents pages background allows this page to follow the front cover, on the other hand in places there is empty unused space which makes the contents to look slightly unprofessonal, to try and solve this problem I suggest that the article are put into groups, e.g. 'Main Features' and 'Upcoming Events'.
Perry: The front cover is extremely professional and utilises the idea of a full page image with effects surrounding, this allows the image to be presented straight to the reader.
Jack: The integration of the image on the front cover works very well, the light comes from the left and the light effects that you have put there “interact” with the image. The fonts, such as the title and the official ‘Beatles’ font used for ‘Beatalls’ looks very professional. The white effects contrast to the dark background therefore making it look far more professional and making the centre image the ‘main’ strong point of you cover. The contents page on the other hand does not work as well, the fonts do not look as ‘exciting’ as they did on the front cover. The images look professional and the white effects tie in with the front cover. I feel that the double page spread is on par with the front cover, it has just the right text to picture ratio and the picture has been edited to perfection. Beatles needs a capital letter, unless this is intended.

Sarah: Its rather good. I like the colours.

Noami: The products you have made look really good. The colours you have used are bright and colourful. I think this will attract more teenagers.

Tuesday, 12 January 2010

Thursday, 17 December 2009

Wednesday, 16 December 2009

Picture editing.

 These are some examples of pictures that i have edited to fit into the magazines style.

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Front Cover



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